The way of my emotions

• Artist: Mikieee
• Description: i wrote this poem when my GF leave me..
  there is too much pain in my heart
  that i cant survive that's the reason i
  wrote a poem to her...
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: emotions

You don't have nothing to worry about
You know all I want is your smile
All I want is the feeling that I want to protect you
The glory that I have
Is the faith that I care about you
The tears that you gave me
Not of sadness but of the words that you told me
All the words that I wanted to hear
Feeling safe when I'm around you
Feeling happy because your smiling
I love you in all my heart
But not in the way of heart heart.....
But the love that wants to protect you and make you feel special.
Deep inside of my recovering heart
Finds hope that you might be the one
But I'm just saying It only lay in our destiny.
These are the was of my emotions ....
heart ----raizenmike44-- heart

Comments

[Klaora]

The word 'that' is WAY too overused. Several lines don't make ANY sense at all, visually or grammatically. Punctuation would have been very nice. Double negatives aren't good, please fix it. You can save this one, but it needs some work. Over-all, it's okay. Good luck.

[xXkathleenclaiireXx]

it's soooooooo NICE........

[angela-lorraine]

super,,,...
i knoe what th feeling..

[ady_296baby]

I know how you feel coz i wuz left by my Bf weeks ago

[Gift Giving World Mule]

awesome

[winterrain31]

FANTASTIC

[3vil 44]

GOOD...