I bet you know me

• Artist: Aenella
• Description: Just how I feel sometimes. It's kind-of a rough draft, but I figured I might as well try and submit some stuff since I'm a gifted writer. Don't know if you guys will like my poetry, though.. ^^;
• Date: 11/23/2008
• Tags: already know

I Bet you already know me

By: Aenella

I don't know you
But I bet you already know me

I'm the girl you throw your food at when your at lunch
Just because you think its funny
Everyone else seems to do it
Guess you must have joined in with the crowd

I bet you already know me
The loud girl with all the weird friends
You must think I seem so happy with them
Because you talk about all of us badly;
Even when we're around

I bet you already know me
Adorned in black and chains
The girl with two toned hair and piercings
You stare at like I'm the devil
Even though I wear a cross around my neck

I bet you already know me
The girl everyone picks on because it's funny
Now I'm on depression medication
And have to go to therapy

I bet you already know me
The girl all the guys flirt with as a joke
Thankfully I learned a long time ago
You only do it to look cool in front of your friends

I bet you already know me
I bet you really do
Maybe you have befriended her
or maybe it's you

Comments

[Brier Wolf]

The writing is nice, although it seems the flow of it seems off. Try to keep a more even tempo throughout the poem. Interesting topic, though. I can see what you tried to do with the ending... but I'm not sure if it works. There's room for improvement, you've got the sense of it down.

[Sugarhigh234]

Oh wow! surprised This is an awesome poem ;D 5/5 stars
Oh yeah ;o FIRST COMMENT! HA LOSERS!! XDDD jk jk