Why Me...?

• Artist: Your Own Personal Hell
• Description: This is a poem I made today because I was feeling really shitty because I like this guy and he doesn't know me, and no one at my school even really notices me or cares for that matter.
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: outcast liers unloved

No one sees me in the hall,
or even even notice me at all.

No one cares if I cry.
They wouldn't notice
if I die.

My friends say they care,
but I know it's not true.

You say you love me...


..Why should I believe you?

-The Invisible

Comments

[Fuginotory]

Don't go off killing yourself over something like that, I had the same problem in the past but then I realized that crying over it is no use so I decided to make myself noticeable, and not by doing something idiotic. Anyhow, nice poem, I give you 4/5 though because I think it is incomplete.

[the Renaissance Lives]

I used to be the invisible kid in the back of the class, but you have more control of your life than you might be able to realize. Best wishes to ya hun, take care.

[the Renaissance Lives]

Sometimes a person commands full attention simply by walking into a room, their social life is full and their days are busy, yet still...they feel alone as ever. There's many lives that are burdened with that feeling of involuntary isolation, but keep yourself independent 'til you can stand by yourself proudly and allow others will come flocking to you.

[Shundra_14]

i love it somethimes i feel that way ^_^ so can i be your friend

[kingmufasa]

yeah a nother thing to say is that was freakin amazing ahhhhhh i loved it it was sweet u need someone to talk to tou can find me

[axo- the white wolf]

Woah, this is really good. iI know that's pretty generic but I can't think of any other words

[Two-bit FoxTrot]

aww....sadnesss
You sure aren't ignored here!