pain

• Artist: furicuri11
• Description: this is a poem about pain (it isn't the type of poem thats rhyming but it's the type of poem thats descriptive
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: pain

there is one word for pain
....the oliberator

everyone feels it
it can be mentally or physically

you can not deny that
you've never felt pain before

so...when you see someone in pain
lend a helping hand, a gentle hug, or maybe a sweet smile

you help people when they go through rough times

you help people when their sick

.....

you help people when because you care

Comments

[Queen_Plum]

it could of maybe used a cupple more lines but besides that i give it a 4/5