Darling Mother

• Artist: X x __ compos M E N T i S
• Description: About a child whose mother was killed in childbirth, thinking back on the sacrifice. Not my best.
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• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: dead mother childbirth

Breathtaking, in its beauty,
the sky is cloudless.
The breeze gently caresses my face.
This is the closest I've been to you,
sitting side by side,
and watching the sun,
as it slinks off to bed
leaving in its wake a sky
brightened by streaks of color.
And when I look,
you are gone.
But, mother, this is
the most precious time
we've ever spent;
since I killed you.

That day you died
so I could live.

Comments

[Here Rests the Dead Era]

Dark as always, to conceal some kind of inner motive, some thought unexpressed, but, nonetheless, felt.
I like it, it's very unlike your other work.

[Ice_priness789]

The last part is too viontent

[XxHuggles_KittensxX]

oh no that is too much...

[CapnBuBu]

Very nice. i think it is very good. 5/5