Why?

• Artist: chickie94
• Description: srry i know it kinda sucks, please comment, be brutal.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: girllovelie

you told me you loved me
is that why you left me?
you told me forever,
is that why you're never around?
you told me i was beautiful,
is that why you never seem to notice?
you said i was smart,
then why you don't listen to me?
i was always there for you,
is that why you aren't here for me now?

Comments

[lollipopsy]

believe me, it sucks a lot less than most of what's on here. it's actually quite nice. 4'd.

[BriiKittie]

i like it
i write poems like that too sometimes 5/5

[angel41791]

Your right, it does suck. There is no flow and is very unoriginal in these modern times. Yet it hits a soft spot in my heart. With a little more rythem and flow this would be an excellent poem. As a friend once said, "Never have I absolutely adored such an excellent example of literary trash." 3/5

[Green Eyed Twilight]

Awsome poem 5/5

[Evertray]

it doesnt suck its good for sad poetry in these times of emo kids writing about random s**t they feel bad about urs has meaning 5/5 =]

[EricsCrow2002]

I like it..... its not to bad. I'll give u a 4/5.