love but gallows

• Artist: near shikimori
• Description: this poem is from a book that i am writing i figured hey why not put it up here to see what everyone thinks of it. be brutal and honest.
• Date: 11/29/2008
• Tags: love romance

You give a man a hard choice,
Die in love and hurt her,
Or live and leave her hurting her yet.
Well i choose love,
For my love for her is unbreakable,
For she is my life,
She is my courage,
She is my love.
I fear no death long as I have her as my love.
So i say.
Bring on your gallows!

Comments

[the dark vampelf]

i think it is good honestly it is good to read some non emo poetry (my poetry) the next one i add will show it

[Gilraen xxx Ringeril]

Brutally and honestly your poem is excellent.
5/5