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What You've Done To Me
by
iCelestial_love
Darkness clouds my skies,
nothing ever feels right,
with the way you look at me,
what could this feeling be?
similar places remind me of home,
so far that i've come,
into darker skies,
constant lies,
that you've told me.
My love for you is dead,
my memories with you i dread,
if only you were here,
you are truly the one i fear.
Where i stand, darkness never leaces,
towering over land and seas,
you've become so cold,
your cheap lies get so old,
someday you will see,
you were meant for me,
but suddenly i see,
we weren't ever meant to be.
As dust blows away,
our memories begin to fade.
my love for you is now hate,
my whole body is numb and cold,
now i have no one to hold.
Someday i'll find,
the one for me,
who can see,
what he has,
when he has me.
After all the lies,
the hate,
i've forgotten all about you,
my skies return to blue,
i'm finally where i'm supposed to be.
a warm home,
and someone who loves me.
- by icelestial_nightmare |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: What You've Done To Me
- Artist: icelestial_nightmare
- Description: um... i wrote this at 12pm.... i uh... sorta had this feeling something bad was going to happen or at least something sad . so i wrote about it and it came out to be a poem >.< i hope you like it. it sorta has a weird tone to it >.<
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: youve done
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Comments (7 Comments)
- iTeh_BraceFace - 03/24/2009
- how long has this been going on? u know u have an average rating of 4 1/2 stars
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- trapaholicsmixtapes - 11/30/2008
- ?
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- xKristellex - 11/30/2008
- beautiful
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- iTeh_BraceFace - 11/30/2008
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u were listening to suddenly i see,
werent u?
but,
i like ur poem!
ur kinda like tim burton.
ur writing is dark and gloomy, but theyre
always love stories.
i think my bro should put a poem in the arena.
that would be funneh!! - Report As Spam
- icelestial_nightmare - 11/30/2008
- i was listening to music when i wrote this.... >.< idk if it makes any sense though D=
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- Zamedia - 11/30/2008
- wow u no poetry real good biggrin
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- XxXMr_JizzXxX - 11/30/2008
- quite good
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