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Take my hand
and hold me tight
lets lay in the sand
during this starry nigh
i say i love you
you look at me
u say u love me two
and that's easy to see
you skin is soft and warm
but you touch is chilling my spine
no fear of the coming storm
we will have each other until that time
the wind it blows
you hold me tighter
the warmth it grows
you make my life brighter
I open my eyes
I'm in my bed
i take a sigh
it was all in my head
- by UGK_DON_bipoIarbear |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: My love, my dream
- Artist: UGK_DON_bipoIarbear
- Description: I actually started writing this a long time ago and found it this morning and finished it hope you like it rate, comment and tell people about me!
- Date: 11/30/2008
- Tags: love dream
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Comments (4 Comments)
- sacuradestiny1 - 12/31/2008
- Interesting, though you should tighten up the grammar. Not bad. 3nodding
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- emo_tigger - 12/03/2008
- its good. Your ryhmes flow together smoothly
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- Xo_MOB_ACE_oX - 12/01/2008
- Really good ^-^
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- -S3Xzilla- - 11/30/2008
- wow you write alot of good poetry <3
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