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I looked into her eyes
I got lost in their depth
A glance into the future
Revealing the secrets she kept
For so many years she cared too
Yet we were both afraid to say
We avoided each other completely...
Every time, simply another day
She cried to me one night.
~Please help, I don't know what to do~
I wrapped my arms around her body.
~It is okay now, I'm here with you~
She told me about her boyfriend,
He cheated, and hurt her bad...
I told her not to worry...
But in the inside I was getting mad.
I held back my anger...
And I comforted her instead.
Playing with her hair,
She lay still on my bed.
I leaned over to kiss her cheek,
She smiled and turned to me.
~Thank you for being there...
I Have finally learned to see~
With that she drifted off,
I left her quietly sleeping.
~How could anyone want to hurt her? ~
I ran through thoughts, my heart leaping.
I met up with her boyfriend,
Swung out of pure love and rage.
A knife stabbed through my stomach..
~God where were you today?~
My head smacking onto the pavement,
My breath getting thin...
My vision blurred and fading slowly...
This was a battle I could never win.
As this darkness consumes me...
Light fills my eyes...
I am proud to have lost my life,
If it meant ending her cries...
- by Xx_British_Boii_xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/30/2008 |
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- Title: ending her cries!
- Artist: Xx_British_Boii_xX
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- Date: 11/30/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Pyrisee - 01/04/2010
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That was so beautiful. I honestly almost cried!!^_^ That was really amazing!
As this darkness consumes me...
Light fills my eyes...
I am proud to have lost my life,
If it meant ending her cries - Report As Spam
- Pyrisee - 01/04/2010
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That was so beautiful. I honestly almost cried!!^_^ That was really amazing!
I met up with her boyfriend,
Swung out of pure love and rage.
A knife stabbed through my stomach..
~God where were you today?~
My head smacking onto the pavement
* My breath getting thin...
My vision blurred and fading slowly...
This was a battle I could never win.
As this darkness consumes me...
Light fills my eyes...
I am proud to have lost my life,
If it meant ending her cr - Report As Spam
- oOSpazBerryIceOo - 12/21/2008
- yeah this rox
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- Robot Squirrel - 12/21/2008
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This...is...
AMAZING
This is probably the best poem I'm ever seen in the arena! - Report As Spam
- Whookie - 12/20/2008
- *baby i ment to say baby in the first reason lol
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- Whookie - 12/20/2008
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first of all; me being the fragile lil bay i am i actually cried
second;this is definatley the best poem i have ever read (and no im not just saying that)
third;I NEVER KNEW U HAD IT IN YA! XD
forth; r all these poems like relating to someone? -nudge nudge- =P
fifth;ummmmm lol idk y i wrote a fifth but 5/5..... - Report As Spam
- Whookie - 12/20/2008
- ........no comment
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