I Can't Even Dance Anymore

• Artist: cubanita shorty
• Description: This poem I wrote my first year of dating. I was 16 and now we've been dating for 4 years! Do the math ;) He didnt cheat on me he was actually just dancing with someone else at a dance, and I guess he thought it was okay. But it wasnt! lol I just really like this poem...hope you will too :)
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: cant even dance anymore

This pain is growing deeper
Than any I can feel
My heart is made of weakness
While yours is made of steal
I know I want to move on
From this horrible mistake
But when I saw you with her
All night I cried awake
Now it seems unforgettable
That so easily you could replace
When holding her just like me
You forgot about my face
Tonight I might die of heartache
With no comfort near
No rhythm can protect me
Now broken by my fear

Comments

[Sittinginacorner]

I love it!
Sounds like something I would write.
That's good thing. =)

[cubanita shorty]

oh i know wat u mean fairy dreamer! lol

[fairy dreamer 578]

it a good peom and some boyfriends are real jerk like my ex that went for a younger girl

[cubanita shorty]

thanks so much.... i love to write smile

[cenafan52]

hey i like that its cool i could never think of something like that pm me back ok