Remnants of a Battlefield

• Artist: xxHuntress of the Nightxx
• Description: So I wrote this poem last year and the end of math class when I realized I had nothing to bring to Writer's Circle. Personally I think this is the best of my poems. Remnants of a Battlefield has also been published in Collected Whispers, a book filled with poems published by the International Society of Poets. Comments on it are lovely =)
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: remnants battlefield warrior sword crimson

Weapons lay scattered upon the ground.
The souls of the long dead
will never find peace
among this unholy land.
Remnants of a battlefield.


Crimson stains have dyed
the walls which have fallen.
No rain will ever wash away
the scarlet torment.
Remnants of a battlefield.


Lost causes have slowly faded away,
ages have passed,
and no one will remember,
the suffering to be forgotten.
Remnants of a battlefield.


I gaze upon this sight
and think to myself,
how can this be so?
When the war fought within my own heart,
was dead long ago.
Remnants of a battlefield.

Comments

[-VSF-Gaara]

nice poem cheetos...vote for me in avi arena pls...and submit the poem i have there as one of your own

[ThisIsNotMyNameBruh]

wow,nice poem,i give it a 5/5,you can almost feel the intensity of the poem as u read it wink

[Mighty Darth ducky]

well cheetos this is still my fav out of all of them^^

[Nikki4815]

I really like it. 5/5. Rate back? My entry is called "Unspoken Message"

[xxHuntress of the Nightxx]

You could say that =)

[7e7e7]

wow that was cool so the war was love or wat?

[Onyx Empress]

Awesome! Very deep and well written.