Apologetic Suicide

• Artist: XxEmbrace The EndxX
• Description:
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: apologetic suicide

Im sorry for the pain I have caused you.

It seems no matter how hard I try,

I just ******** things up.

I need to die.

I have tried.

Again and again I have tried,

To end your misery,

By taking my life.

Discarding it like a piece of trash.

Slowly being stomped into the ash.

Six feet beneath the grass.

Would you come to my funeral?

I dont think you would.

I wouldn't,

Even if I could.

Why does everything have to go wrong for me?

My family was right.

Ill never amount to anything in my life.

The whole point of this rhyme,

Was to say ill never bother you again.

You get your wish,

My suicide...

Comments

[lissabean]

Really sad if you think about it... But that's how writers learn to find their inner writing style. Very nice. ^_^

[Lectern]

That was trully amazing. You had enough rhyme, but it didn't become unserious at all. You did very good.

[A-Class01]

thats a pretty awesome poem wink i like it...reminds me of a goth (no offense or anything honestly).