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What would u do if u lost all u had i one day?
Wat if it was ur falt it all happened?
How would u go on if the one u loved was lost forever and paradise was out of reach?
would u go on?
Would u find a way to be with them again?
Or would u stay around a suffer thier loss?
How would u cope with the pain of staying?
Would u have hope for a new begining?
- by Aya-Whitewater |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: Tribute to the wolves
- Artist: Aya-Whitewater
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Description:
i wrote this after seeing the last episode of a short series called "wolf's rain"
when i finished it i was balling my eyes out it was so sad. then all these thoughts hit me.
i thought this is like a poem and that i had to write it down. i was in such a hurry i wrote all this on 6 post-it notes. i call it a tribute to those who died n the series. - Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: what would life death
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Comments (7 Comments)
- amberannbaugh - 12/25/2008
- hey. yeah i probably would just cry my eyes out but then id get up and after promising never to care about anything ever again id go about my duties and move on with life. but then im the sentimental type and yet am very tough but ive already suffered lots of loses and dont know if my heart could take much more damage. its pretty good though but then ive never seen the series so i wouldnt know if it really goes with it.
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- Orspazzm - 12/06/2008
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this one is ok to me
and no i probably would sit and cry over my loss. =3 - Report As Spam
- Aya-Whitewater - 12/06/2008
- well im not the highly sensitive type so give me a break. man idk wat u think i think its just fine.
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- WolfeTheDemon - 12/05/2008
- well...its not that sad...3/5 i watched the series and this poem or whatever could have been 6 times better
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- Aya-Whitewater - 12/05/2008
- thats the thought. will we find it?
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- Linezax777 - 12/05/2008
- sadness. . . . with such words but with truth in them. will we ever find our "paradise"?
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- -Freewings Soar- - 12/04/2008
- i like this poem 5/5 could ya check mine out ??
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