Star on a Winter's Night

• Artist: kilaryen
• Description: The star I was looking at was Sirius. I've heard that stars are brighter in wintertime.
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: star winter

Star light, star bright,
Burning red, blue, and white,
Shining with all its might,
Like a diamond in the light,
In the sky's wondrous height,
A shining celestial kite;
You are truly quite
A wondrous sight
As you glitter in the night

Comments

[iTZiK808]

lots of ryming which is alright and yes it did sound patriotic. ^_^

[morchase1]

its alright but don't use as much rhymes next time kk ur great at it so keep at it i can sense so much inspiration from one little thing! : )

[Praylaya]

Sounded patriotic honestly. lol