Autumn in Aeternum

• Artist: Rinarii
• Description: The beauty and comfort of fall. I could walk along forever.
  
  I wrote this for an English assignment, though I've made quite a few changes since then. Mostly because I wanted to use it for something else but it demanded a slightly different meaning.
  Alrighty comment away!
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: autumn aeternum

Crackle 'neath footfalls
A river crimson and gold
'Round Broken Elders of Arbor. Their stories untold.

Called by the whispers of angels
Like windswept feathers they fall.
Our silent protectors;
Atop the wings of heaven they soar.

From their velvet embrace
Warmth and wonder are born.
Such is the splendor
Of perpetual autumn.

Comments

[Rinarii]

Thanks love!

Yea I never much got into the whole syllable counting thing. I probably should and I do on occasion...just not usually. >.< And autumn's my favorite season. Now if only we didn't have to attend school at that time. But thanks!
You too Paper Laundry! ^_^

[Ariiadne]

WELL HAY THAR GURLFREND.

Good work. wink Some of the syllable patterns threw me off a bit when reading, but that's just me. I'm so used to writing and reading structured poetry. Regardless, I like it. Autumn is indeed a lovely season~

[Augee]

First!

Love it! The detail describes everything perfectly. I had a lovely image in my head while reading it. smile