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They said love conquers all
Maybe that's why for you I fall
I don't care if we don't look good together
All I know is when I'm with you I feel better
Just seeing your smile brightens my day
hearing your voice makes me feel like a flower blossoming in May
I hope we can stay this way forever
I know our love will end for never
'cause our love always get stronger
our love will always conquer
- by Lady Whimsical |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/04/2008 |
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Lorena Ann - 12/08/2008
- this poem is sooo awesome dyan
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- xaleblade - 12/07/2008
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omg I love this poem ^.^ if I may add a small suggestion ^.^ to keep with the sync rhythm you should prolly change line 6 to
and your voice makes me feel like flower in may
line 9+ line 10
change get to gets. then add the word and at the beginning of line 10 ^.^
you don't have to but I am saying these changes keep the meaning and they help the sync ^.^ *hug* I love it 10/5 - Report As Spam
- mehreen_27 - 12/06/2008
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OMG
this is HELLA GOODDD
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- Xellica22 - 12/05/2008
- capital W-O-W!I never knew you were this good in writing!Keep up the good work!XD
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- chilzy_lilzy - 12/04/2008
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OMG and YAY!! first one to comment!!! haha
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- chilzy_lilzy - 12/04/2008
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good job dyan!! love ur poem! write more!! ♥
u meanie i was watching something and u tell me to comment now!! haha smile - Report As Spam
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