In The World We Breath

• Artist: I--Signet Canvas--I
• Description: A View In The Way I See The World
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• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: world breath

In The World We See,
There Is More,
Time,
As It Fly's
Our Life Shortens,
It Decays,
Left There
To Rot.
Why?
We Should all know.
In The Tears We Drown
In.
Lifeless
As We Are.
Left To Wander The
Cold Ground.
Your Cold Hand
Reaches For Me.
So Soft.
Flawless...
Like Marble.
Eyes As Dark
Yet
Fulled With Life.
Imagination,
Such
A Beautiful
Thing.

Comments

[Lorena Ann]

this poem is so awesome

[xXBlack AuraXx]

oh and 5/5 its really desrpitive of your view(and what aly banaly said here)

[xXBlack AuraXx]

nice and hi chibi!!!! and like 4th comment WOOT! I FEEL PROUD biggrin .

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

that was.... interesting, considerings its your view of the world... but its nice to know evn tho the world as you see it is dark and bottomless that theres someone there for you. that theyre your hope, the very opposite of the world you see. so eventually your world isnt dark because the person that loves you shines, and when a light is seen in the dark, it cant be called total darkness anymore...

[II- Time Eclipse -II]

Its Quite Good, You sure did capture the true essentials of your view.
great job

[xXCuddlie_Yet_ViciousXx]

oh....i love it ^.^