My EX-Best Friend

• Artist: rAiNbOwZxLuVxmE
• Description: Me and my best friends r now ex best friends, and this is how i feel...she is the closes ive come to hating someone, and man does it suck!!!
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: exbest friend

heart heart Your the one who pierced my life,
You did it with a small, little knife.

And tht knife it had a name
It was dishonesty thts wht to blame.

You'd promise things tht never will come
Caused now i see i belived in a bum.

On top of tht you gained my trust
You only did this to watch it be crushed.

And all those sad secrets i had told you
All you gave me was a simply " Boo-Hoo"

Now you think tht I'll forgive all your lies
Tht I'll see you as nice with my own two eyes.

But thts not the case i can not forgive
I promise i wont as long as i live.

So i say goodbye to my Ex-Best Friend
And i hope my heart will start to mend.

Comments

[swim_emo_swim_4_your_life]

deep...6/5

[xXRawr-GirrXx]

Wow reminds me of how I feel with my ex-bestfriend. Actually, it's pretty damn exact. Only my ex-bestfriend was a guy, and I don't hate him... He's just done so much that now I'm done, and apparently so is he.

[xXTakashi-SanXx]

This is great... Yet so sad T-T
I feel your pain, in fact I just wrote a poem about pretty much the same thing.

[Rabbit-eyes]

Not bad, but it still has a few typos and missing punctuation that you should fix up. With a little work on those aspects, I think you have a good poem going. Good luck in your future friendships. Hopefully they work out better than that one.

[AngelTaylorxoox]

yh know wat ur feeling, me and my"best friend" are now becoming ex best friends, we used to do everything together and we liked all the same stuff and always agreed on doing watever it was we were gunna do and i told her everything and now i'm regreting it because now i'm hearing all these things around other people i never told and she was the only one i told them too...... sux to find out someone u thought u could trust and thought were true are really backstabbing bitches

[moonlight hidden shadow]

your really good !
(by the way i now what you feel like )

[Rockrockzan]

awwww.
i know just how you feel by the way.
it really sucks to have a person so close to you stab your back