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I got on Gaia Online today
And Arenas like I often do
And there's something that need to say
Something annoying and quite true.
On here in their misspelled words
They all lament their broken lives
No imagery with broken birds
Is in the lines, uncapitalized.
They say they cut and cut their wrists
And cry their shining tears alone
They say they bite and bare their fists
And have deep dark feelings, all unknown.
They tell me tales of their break-up
And all of their misfortune since
They tell me they wear black make-up
And gory things that make me wince
They say they always want to die
They say their life is all behind
They say that they just want to fly
Their self and Death, all intertwined
But yet I read them, and I read more
Because they can't all be like this!
But all is just blood on the floor
And the splendor of a demon's kiss.
But there are good ones, if you look
The poems unconventional
In the Spotlight like a book
Literature multidimensional.
My suggestion to the authors here:
Don't cry to me, try something new
Instead of making words your tear
Write something that's not all about you.
- by The Love of Money |
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- | Submitted on 12/07/2008 |
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- Title: Typical Gaia Poems
- Artist: The Love of Money
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Description:
I'm tired of seeing writing about people cutting themselves or their problems in their relationships or how much they love someone but can't tell him... Poetry is a way to loose your emotions, sure, but it's better as art- to be beautiful, not to get pity for yourself. :dramallama:
I understand this’s hypocritical, but I'm sure there are others that agree with what I'm saying.
Comment please! I want to know what you think.
You can fave too you know… ;) - Date: 12/07/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- philelectricguitar - 01/04/2009
- I completely agree! Most of the poems are too depressing. Good job!
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- The Love of Money - 12/08/2008
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Thanks for the ratings and the love. XD
Manderz, I think you're right, but I was just tired of seeing that kind of poetry. But it's not that I want it all to be happy, just original. Emo-ish poems are about all I see on here, and none of them are very good. - Report As Spam
- B-B-B-BeanCup - 12/07/2008
- Owned!
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- manderz14 - 12/07/2008
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I somewhat agree. But some people feel that way and have no one to talk to about it, so they write it in a poem. And the poetry about how they love someone but they can't tell them is true because a lot of people are too afraid to express themselves because they are afraid of being rejected. But I agree that some poems should be happy, but some people can't write about anything happy. But I like the poem though.
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- Cassius Black - 12/07/2008
- I love you. Its the truth thought they just want attention.
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- Pomegrandeur - 12/07/2008
- I think I love you. xD
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- xXx_S3XII_xXx - 12/07/2008
- Agreed...5/5
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