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death we all experince it wen the time comes
death the cruelest thing in the world to me
death a punishment and a privialege
death is the best thing to some people
Death is punishment to those who sin over and over
death is a privlege to those who have done good and chose death
deathis bad because u lose those close to u and the things u charished
deathis good because u get away from all the people haten and bugging you
Death is the best the worst the cruelest thing you'll ever come by
A fact is tht death claims peoples lives every day and we don't even now so pray at least once a week for all those people tht r hopefully in heaven as u read this right now so before u go to bed tonight pray pray pray and jesus will help u wit one thing in your life
- by Friday Heart |
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- | Submitted on 12/08/2008 |
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- Title: death is a cruseum thing
- Artist: Friday Heart
- Description: the things death give and take dath is well you'll find out
- Date: 12/08/2008
- Tags: death cruseum thing
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- Death for Wonderland - 01/10/2009
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It's okay. But seriously you sound like my Lutheran Minister father with the whole pray pray pray pray pray blah blah blah jesus stuff. Sorry, If that offends you, I'm just sick of it because I hear it all the time. 4/5
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- wiccanmother_zoey - 12/10/2008
- Although your writing is good, and the emotions are clear, some may disagree with your stand on death. Death is not cruel, in my humble opinion. It's a blessing, a time of rebirth, when you shed off the human errors you made in your life time, and are free. Death is the door between this plane and the shining afterlife, whether is heaven, nirvana, the Summerland or any other Afterlife. Death should be embraced and even celebrated. its freedom
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- Holy vampireprincess - 12/08/2008
- u r AWSOME!!! i just love ur poems!!! keep writing!!-^^-
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