Would You Still Love Me...

• Artist: x_Celestial Deception_x
• Description: My second entry in the arenas, and one of my favorite works, please vote and rate fairly. Thankies
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: would still love poetry

If I was a soul all out all alone
Would you still love me and call me your own?
Suppose I was hurting, crying in the rain
Would you still love me and relinquish the pain?
Released all my anger, took it all out on you
Would you still love me and all that I do?
If Im not all you need, can't fulfill your desire
Would you still love me, would it burn like fire?
Will you make your love known, how long will this last
Would you still love me, future, present, and past?
If the sun ceased to rise, would you hold me in the dark
Would you still love me, and let fate leave its mark?
In one million years, shall we still be together
Would you still love me and love me forever?

Comments

[x_Celestial Deception_x]

Thanx!

[sydcole]

I really liked this. Its really good. Umm. I am constantly reminded day in and day out of how ppl get hurt by love and this is very good and it reminded me of how so many ppl are looking for the one person that will love them forever. This portrays that love beautifully.

[-Aesthetix]

I thought it was really sweet (:

[KG-AppleJuice]

i like it