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i sit and wonder
am i going under?
i guess its hard to say..
if i will ever be okay...
but for now i see
a life that will never be..
never right,
always out of sight
falling further into the abyss
drifting into peacefull bliss
out of this world...
and another life unfurled
right before my eyes...
it was my demise..
to see it all...
and do nothing but fall...
- by Frogue_ducky |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: Falling
- Artist: Frogue_ducky
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- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: falling
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Comments (4 Comments)
- KuroSamaXIII - 12/12/2008
- Wow, this is pretty deep and I can see the effort put into this. It's great! 5/5
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- Devios Sano - 12/11/2008
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It's really good, you put a lot of thought into this.
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- xXxFallen_SkaterxXx - 12/11/2008
- i like it 5/5 n_n
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- platypusgirl - 12/10/2008
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sad but i can tell you put effort in to it
5/5 - Report As Spam