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I lay motionless
Against cold ground
Mesmerized in fear
From your soul
My life crashes down
Upon rocky waves
Of broken love
In your eyes
I read pain
But my heart is frozen
In the time of past and present
All I have loved at once time
I loved alone
And all I cried for
Is now wasted
- by dreamypurple_moon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2008 |
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- Title: Fear
- Artist: dreamypurple_moon
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- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: fear
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Taju - 02/08/2009
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I can actually feel from this poem and ignore the previouse comment they don't know how to appreciate art but it is really deep and spreads your emotions to everyone.
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- lil swagger3 - 12/13/2008
- that sucks he@#a bad that is so bad im not even ganna rate it cause you made it thats why its ga@ and le@#oyour just a f*g peace ya b@#$*
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- The Ocarina Knight113 - 12/12/2008
- i must agree with ice.its great yet sad.
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- oO_falling_tearz_Oo - 12/12/2008
- wow thats deeep...u can feeled the sad vibe coming from the short yet powerful words. AMAZING lol >.<
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- Tsuki Kurai - 12/12/2008
- The lines are way too chopped up.
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- Colonel ICE - 12/12/2008
- great one. you can really feel the sadness and the fear of this person.truely a great poem.
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