My broken bloody heart

• Artist: vampirechick7
• Description: My best friend wrote this and I just wanted to show her she can write good peotry. she writes poems about when people come to her wen they are upset and some are reallly good.
• Date: 12/12/2008
• Tags: friends

WE are great friends
Playing together
Known her since i was six
She trusts me with everything. She knows she can come to me for anything
And me to her
Hope to never lose her

Comments

[zephrol]

i've had that to, and remember pain lets u know ur alive

[mysticrydder]

i know its hard to get back on your own two feet. but try! you cant keep moping about because of one guy! take the experience and learn from it! yes its sad. but love can happen again.

[The Grace Of Rain]

this is pure poetry dont let people say it sucks cuz they do that to me all the time but what they dont understand is that poetry comes from the bottom of our hearts...and from emotions so yes this is very good.5/5

[Fingerstyler]

May i suggest you to try something a bit more out of the classical scheme?

[Victus Lucifer]

Pure poetry.