Quit it...

• Artist: Dark Lady Dante
• Description: seriously quit it!
  
  
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: quit

Im tired of the sins
that we do why not
do it some were else
or some where were
those pictures dont stare

when you do what is wrong
they stare and lare and they
dont care

they look at you like your monster
your a devil of all that is underage
so quit as they say quit it night and day

why not just watch tv or
keep something in your mind
that isnt what you saw
i know its normal but sereously
quit it

Im not saying dont do it
if it makes you happy go
ahead but come on looking
at that does not make you happy
it only makes you less of your will

Haha ha you laugh when you watch
this thing but then you look at your self
after your sences came
what am i doing you ask why cant i
quit it as they say quit it night and day

you pray for gods help but it never comes
you know why you had many chances
he's not giving you any more so
quit while you can quit it and make those memories
blow away by a fan.

Comments

[Lovers Never Tell]

I would like to make this one very important comment. PLease, please, please! redo your poetry with the proper grammer and puncution. It gives it more of a flow and helps the reader by guiding them through the real points.

Do check out Bohemian's Challenge and contest threads for more help in the Origional Poetry/Lyric and also The Mistery of Malcontent for more types of forms and ways of writing. All questions will be answered here. I wish you luck.

[Dark Lady Dante]

I took my own first commet...take THAT