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these dark images in my head
weaving like thread
from all the dread
i saw
now i draw
what i see
from these white walls
i am locked
inside, inside
myself, alone,depressed
heavy with sorrow, i wait
so they'll decide my fate
oh dark, dark writting
on the wall!!!!
- by Jenny_midnight_JAWs |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/14/2008 |
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- Title: dark writting
- Artist: Jenny_midnight_JAWs
- Description: this the first poem I did on gaia!! very dark....
- Date: 12/14/2008
- Tags: dark writting
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- calvin-hyuga - 04/11/2009
- It may seem like depreession to some but I see this poem as describing insanity
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- Mud99 - 12/16/2008
- Dark indeed, but why should I care? Really, ever writer should ask themselves why their audience should care about any piece they write. I just don't see why I should care about this piece.
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- X-Prince Alvin-X - 12/14/2008
- Shows the inward spiral towards insanity by way of lack of freedom. (I'm guessing.) Interesting piece.
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