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Riding the waves in an endless sea
whether of dreams or reality,
is it heaven, or something above?
you cannot ever truly see,
Why are you even here?
you wonder as whispers caress your ear,
the soothing wind coming from the sky,
you are still here, and you don't know why,
Not quite living, your dream's alive,
And all the great hopes you used to strive,
you cant quite place in your thoughts that swarm,
all you know, is the calming warm,
You know of clouds and feel carefree,
You know not of any destiny,
just drifting in an endless sea,
floating for eternity.
- by Cottoncandyocbra3 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/15/2008 |
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- Title: Death
- Artist: Cottoncandyocbra3
- Description: A somewhat different approach to the view of death.
- Date: 12/15/2008
- Tags: deathfloatlife
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Comments (6 Comments)
- WereSquishy - 05/30/2009
- I think I see the evolution of your works through the wording.
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- iiReina - 12/29/2008
- death, huh? it sounds so great for if you're dead! xDD nice poem~ 5/5
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- x__C r e a m - C h i - 12/28/2008
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wow thats good 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Dayzheart - 12/28/2008
- great words simple and strong
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- Bleuraven123 - 12/17/2008
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yep!! i think it sounds like you've been dead and come back to life and now you're describing to us what it feels like..
that was a compliment...and more, it sounds fab even if its death - Report As Spam
- Mud99 - 12/16/2008
- Flows well, Interesting concept. 4/5
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