dreams

• Artist: MissUnbelievable
• Description: It´s an old writing but i still like it
  It´s translated from german into english and i tried my best to keep the rhymes
  Please tell me how you like it
  Thx^^
• Date: 12/15/2008
• Tags: dreams control friendship hope shadow

Can´t you see
Don´t you agree
Every dream a grace
But no clear gaze
Me and you
You and me
There is no us
There´s only me

In my dream
A silent scream
Without shadows, without light
Full of dust, there´s no sight
You and me
Me and you
I´m under your control
Just looking at you

I am hoping
For a door that´s open
Something for me to show
A nice place where I can go
Who am I
And who are you
I disappear
When I´m with you

Can´t you see
Don´t you agree
Now my sight
It is so bright
It´s over now
Your lies I know

Comments

[PolarFux]

Was soll ich denn dazu sagen? v.v'
Genau so gut wie die andren beiden Arena Einträge?
5/5 ^^

[Angel Seraphiel]

wow
real cool
i like it very much and u not even english so it´s amazing ^^

[Jokeph Ryun]

Better than most Ive read, theres a sense of illusion and mystery. 5

[shoogah-baybee]

not bad! 2/5