(Don't have a title)

• Artist: lunedusoleil
• Description: I've got nothing to say. And I don't have a title for it. Wouldn't mind if you have a title for it and tell me. :)
• Date: 12/15/2008
• Tags: dont have title

The last time I saw
The remnants of my childhood
I recall a blurry feeling
Somewhere in the abyss that is my mind
Hazy memories
Of a castle in the air
Some euphoria in the sky
With the fear of the nostalgia sucking me in
I look back on
My beautiful and enchanting imagination
The world I saw through my eyes
Thinking of those silent days
When the heavens were crying tears of joy
Or the sun flooding the world in a glow
Reminds me of the rapturous wishes and dreams
As numerous at the night sky
Those treasures
I still hold dear
If not closer to me
But
My line of vision
Between reality and fantasy
Are as blurry as those memories
The last time I saw
My castle in the air
Was in my past, present, and future
I will hold them closely
And let them hold me up a little longer
So I can retrieve the stars in the sky
That were once upon a time
My dreams and inspirations.

Comments

[SUNTEKE]

it sounds familiar >.>

[IceyTalonz]

Oh, very good work. My eyes enjoyed every word! The message of it is elegant and beautiful, whilst profound. Again, very good. As for a title, perhaps something simple yet meaningful, perhaps along the lines of "Whistful Blur"? I'm not sure about that, though, since I'm suffering from writer's block at the moment. |D;