Beach of beauty

• Artist: October098
• Description: i wrote this awhile back and it still makes me wish i was there
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: beach beauty

Take me to the beach of beauty
let me see the never ending ocean
let the sunset amaze me

Make it blind me
I want the wind to dance around me
I want to smell the salty air

Let me see the dolphins jump appon the waves
Let me here the waves pound aginst the shore
Let me feel the sand under my feet

Let me be alone
Let my problems disolve into happiness
Let the sunset warm me

Let me be happy
Let me smile
Let me breath

Let me see what it feels like to be happy

Comments

[Dragons_rule_the_sky]

i like it, its nice to see someone actualy writing something happy on gaia (not that i should talk...) the descriptiveness was good, i liked it. and speeling isn't important, its the message beneath the words, and if you can't get over that, thats your fault *glares at Beany Melon*

[Musical Beanbags]

Wow, that's really beautiful. (spelling could use a bit of work, though) XP

[October098]

what

[iwrestledaslothonce]

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