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You love me
I love you
Having eachother keeps the sky blue
When your away
My sky is gray
Praying for the best of day
You love me
I love you
Who ever knew this love was true?
- by Vampires Wews- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: Love is true
- Artist: Vampires Wews-
- Description: I want comments on how i did
- Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: love true
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Comments (3 Comments)
- philelectricguitar - 01/16/2009
- It's pretty good. but, there are a few words that could be changed, to make it flow a bit better. 4/5.
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- haku is cheesy - 12/29/2008
- It reminds me of that Barney song.
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- SmileCute12 - 12/22/2008
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not too bad =D
ill give it a 4/5
you could try and find more colorful words, but otherwise it was pretty good
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