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like the blackrose i am death
and as the blade strikes
blood ozes out dripping
and drip by drip my cares, fears, sorrows,lies,and hate melt away
but this only last for so long
and the grat felling leaves
and i am stuck with those same fellings in the darkness
no one is there
and my blood crustens over to be healed
but my sorrows come and go again
gush by gush my life is put back in relax
and the darkness laughs for my hearts is weak
the darkness follows me and tauntss me
for i have turned from the light and gone to the road of uter darkness
the darkness relaxas me as my blood gets devoured by the sink
and the red stains my arms with streaks of my sorrows
and all i want is to be with out these emotions but they appear over and over again
and then i see the most unimaginable thing
the light from which i straided from held its arms out of tears of missing me
and i am filled with guilt and run towards it forgetting my fears,hate,sorrows,caes,and fears forever
and being filled with unfading light and dispersing the darkness
- by kiba_akira |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: the darkness within
- Artist: kiba_akira
- Description: dont know why i wrote it
- Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: darkness within
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Conversate - 09/13/2009
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For some strange reason, It sounds familiar.
Like you ripped off the lyrics to a song.
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- OMG You Killed Kenny1596 - 01/16/2009
- deep poem- but a couple of mis-spellings
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- Shurtugal_Hinata_Hana - 01/05/2009
- Wow good job sigh ~looks away and stares into space~
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- emolemon18 - 12/30/2008
- Thats it! Thats why I used to cut myself. You did a grate job capturing that feeling. 5/5
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- xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx - 12/26/2008
- very good. i love it.
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- aewilkinson - 12/23/2008
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that was amazingly written
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