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She sat by the window
the bright sun shining on her
and falling on the fountain
of gold that streamed down her back
each thread was perfect
and shiny and long
it fell to her slender waist
and tickled her neck
Turned up to the sun
her face was a glow
pale as moonlight
but bright as the light upon it
Her smile was the sweetest
with lips cherry red
and when they parted
a laugh escaped
ringing like a crystal bell
Gleaming and sparkling
her eyes of chocolate brown
fell on a flower
with such a tenderness, that if
were i in the flowers place
i would weep for happiness
And there sat an angel
brimming with happiness
i wish i could be like her
but instead i am me
and never shall i say hello
to this angel of my dreams
except in my sleeping mind
for that is the only time
i may look upon this ideal me
- by earthlover7 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/22/2008 |
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- Title: The ideal me
- Artist: earthlover7
- Description: this is a poem about my fantasy me, every one has one, like in ur dreams: u always picture urself as prettier, smarter, better in every possible way...in a way, ur role model...
- Date: 12/22/2008
- Tags: ideal angel rolemodel
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Arkelle - 06/15/2009
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^^ I think this is one of my favorite poems i've read on gaia!
You have great writing ability, really!
My only critisisms would be to work on spelling and grammer.
If you work on editing your work this could be trully amazing!
Keep it up! 5/5 :3 - Report As Spam
- tangella_girl - 12/23/2008
- aaww purty! but dreams are good, no?
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