Tell me you love me

• Artist: krystal_meyers_4ever
• Description: I wrote this when I was really depressed one day. I write my best stuff when I'm depressed.
  Give me tips if you don't like it. I you do like it then rate it and comment.
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: tell love

Walk with me in the prairies
Laugh with me when we have fun
Hold me tight through my struggles
And tell me you love me

Cry with me when I have no one
Tell me how much I am loved
Help me through this battle
And let me know everything will be alright

Let me grab a razor and carve words into my skin
Don't wake me if I pass out
Because I will wake up by myself
That is, if that's how it's supposed to be

Sit with me on the dock by the ocean
Let me tie a rope around my neck
I'll attach a cinder block to it and dive in
I told you to leave and never come back
Don't tell a single soul what I've done
For they will find out on their own

Since you were to sad to listen to what I said
Then drag my body out of the ocean
With pale white skin and perfect scars on my arms
Bury me in the cemetery where no body lies
And let my body decay in the soil
Leave me flowers, and wear rainbows to my funeral
Don't cry for me my darling, I don't want you to be sad
You'll be with me once more someday

Comments

[Thorn Of The Sky]

I liek it very much,I also write better when Im depressed,or angry....XD just not when Im happy,it doesn't make sense,well it kkind of does.But good job!

[Hong Gi]

whoa u write better when u are depressed?
well please don't get depressed often!!
oks well ur poem is really good
I can feel the aura ur trying to get
some words needs to be replaced
I feel like u got it but its like hmm a part of it is missing
but overall its GOOD!
oh please comment mine also!
cuz I want to knoe more on what people think