~Currently no title~

• Artist: tiggymewmew
• Description: Just a dribble I wrote a while back.
• Date: 12/25/2008
• Tags: currently title

Hot, prickling
distending slowly, straining
a body aflame
a soul in shame

Love, means nothing yet everything
an empty feeling, a fullness of life
Holding the night sky
hearts full of lies;
Dissonance

Does it devour like fire?
Burn as a winter too long?
Strong as steel, brittle as glass
How long shall this last?

Comments

[Gothika_DeJeur]

The first part is sad . . . the second is blisteringly painful. Good job on the poetry.

[Lieutenant Saint]

It's really good but keep workin on your poetry.

[Kiera 010]

wow i like it...but u reallly should give it a title ^-^

[steamyhappygrunny]

it was great! i tink luv suks lol