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Life,
It's a sheet of music.
There's highs and lows,
but at some points it just in the middle.
There is flats, and sharps,
and sometimes there's naturals thrown in.
It's slow or fast,
but sometimes it's just that perfect pace.
It can clash together,
or it can blend beautifully together.
It's all up to you,
and what music is for you.
- Title: Life & Music
- Artist: brennanb2
- Description: This is a poem i wrote in 6th Grade. Music is everything to me. I love it...
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: life music
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Comments (4 Comments)
- maydaymouse - 07/15/2009
- I like it. Describes how life is on a regular basis to me.
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- xxX3mo HeartedXxx - 06/19/2009
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i do like it
its very true
although mostly lows fer mine>> - Report As Spam
- Deceased Poet - 12/27/2008
- Hmm. I love the extended metaphor. (I hope you know what that is). It is very well-written. I have never been able to actually write an extended metaphor poem cuz I stink at it, but, you have a talent for it. I give it a five. If there were more, I'd give a ten. smile Amazing work. Be sure to rate mine, please!
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- brennanb2 - 12/26/2008
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if u don't like it plz tell me
it's just wat i can remember of it,
the actual thing got lost in a big clean. - Report As Spam
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