-
I can't believe it's happening,
I never wanted you to hear me sing,
I was just so shy,
I felt as if I wanted to cry,
The days grew long,
So I wrote you this simple song,
You felt anger and hate,
But I knew I was great,
I finally knew,
As my voice grew,
I had a great voice,
But that was your choice,
Everyone loved it,
After years it became a hit,
Finally I became a star,
But you went to far,
You crossed the line,
When I was just fine,
Many years ago,
People found you cold in the snow,
You begged me,
But you did not see,
I was great,
I didn't need your hate.
- Title: I Can't Believe It
- Artist: Lex2442
- Description: i wrote this poem after i relized how great a talent can be if you have one, you shouldn't hide your talent if you know your great.
- Date: 12/26/2008
- Tags: cant believe
- Report Post
Comments (3 Comments)
- Gravetye - 02/17/2009
- Check your meter. It might help it flow better.
- Report As Spam
- CannibalWizards - 12/27/2008
-
Its pretty Good.
- Report As Spam
- Dire_Desolation - 12/26/2008
- keep it up, u seem to be good at it
- Report As Spam