I Love her so

• Artist: TheEaterOfFood
• Description: This is a true poetry
• Date: 12/28/2008
• Tags: girl together

I loved her so much,
I thought its to good to be true,
But her lie darkend my heart,
I wish we can be together,
Yet we still we hate each other,
But my Heart is to dark to forgive her

Comments

[PS18]

Not bad, though it could've been longer. Check out my entry?

[MindlessError]

Its something deep but I think you could have posed the words differently 5/5