What I am, or what I may be

• Artist: Juggalo_LAW
• Description: We are the futuer, We decide what we're going to do tomarrow but if dieing is not in that plan you just have to accept that maybe God hates you in all of reality he wants nothing to do with you, so all you just have to do is accept that we don't need him.
• Date: 12/30/2008
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I am Jack's raging fists, constantly pounding and pounding on that of human flesh, I am Jack's bordum constantly trying to find somthing to do, I am Jack's absantness, I lose myself in my state of mind.................
I am Jack's five sences
I see what Jack's closed eyes cannot
I hear what Jack's muffled out ears can't
I taste when Jack's tounge has been cut out of his mouth
I smell what Jack's clogged nose can not
I feel when Jack's num hands wont
I am the unspoken words pouring out of Jack's mouth.........

I am Jack and I am here For my reasons and mine alone.

Comments

[Daarknes]

I agree with Pon_di_edge. I would have loved to give this 5 stars, because I can really feel it, but the poor grammar disrupts the ebb and flow of your poetry, spoiling the effect.

[darkangel9194]

I think it's great!

[l3eautiful_Liar_12]

but i love it!!!

[l3eautiful_Liar_12]

hey its me, not to be rude but u need to re-read your poems and your descriptions or make the computer spell it for u. and so on. the only part i under stand is the part when u said i lose my self in my state of mind. just saying