Love me

• Artist: onionio
• Description: Not my best work, but it needed to be written. it's just me questioning my relationship with my mother.
• Date: 12/30/2008
• Tags: love

If I were to bring you shame
By doing something wrong
Would you forgive me and keep me close
And forget before long

If I were to lose myself
And not act quite right
Would you still care and never leave
And hug me especially tight

If I were to run away
Would you miss me so
Would you search for me and never sleep
Until I came home

If I were to break your heart
By forgetting your song
Would you remember and tell me once more
Would you still love me, Mom?

Comments

[Zalzie]

ah, not bad- good emotions sent to the reader and it flows nicely

[KiMoNo18GiRl]

nice hey check out my new(first) poem called i wonder and wait 4/5(9/10)

[XxX-BeTtA-ShAdEz-XxX]

that cute!!!5/5