My Family

• Artist: salty malty
• Description: Grandma Mary
  Is quite contrary
  Grandpa Joe
  Has to go
  Auntie Susie
  Is really choosy
  Uncle Jim
  Lost his limb
  My brother Pete
  Has smelly feet
  My sister Louise
  Is a police
  My goldfish Goldie
  Has become mouldy
  And me Laura
  Adore 'Dora the Explorer'
• Date: 01/01/2009
• Tags: myfamily

i was bored so i decided to write this
i thought it was okay so i submitted it lol xd wink biggrin

Comments

[-x- Fridge -x-]

Ok, first of all, the poem isn't that great. It's very inconsistent, also the poem should be posted where your description is posted. You reversed them by accident. 2.5/5