live again

• Artist: xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx
• Description: this is a sequel to my other poem nothing,if you haven't read nothing go read it now then read this,please vote,please comment,no mean comments please
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: live again

from the depths of despair my soul did rise,
from the gloomy cave of hate and despise,
to emerge from darkness twenty years later,
into perfect peace over the layer
of sadness,hate and despair,
the sun was bright,
i held on tight,
to the joy inside my heart,
i had reached for a hope long before,
a hope that seemed lost,
but that hope,
had come back.

Comments

[just_cuttie_lol]

check out my poem plz!!

[just_cuttie_lol]

very good!!!!! nice!!!!!!!

[xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx]

oops,i'll fix that*blush*

[tampico-chan]

very very good. the only thing wrong is the 'sole'. the kind you mean is soul. but its very nice. my life is s**t at the moment, and this gives me hope. maybe, just maybe, if i try... thank you.

pls comment back?

[xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx]

1k for the first person to become a fan

[xX Super Dino Rawrs Xx]

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