Destruction

• Artist: Hana-CHaN02
• Description: Well here is another poem by me. Also Please, Please check out my other entries at:
  http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/gallery/?uid=13119144
  Especially my poems Doubt and Fire and Flames because I really need comments on those. So please comment on this poem and my other work, I really need constructive criticism.
  
• Date: 01/03/2009
• Tags: destruction premonition vision dream nightmare

Full moon’s light
Reaches
From a thin curtain
Of clouds
Revealing the ruins
Of a once beautiful city
Destroyed
Broken
By disaster
Chaos
The earth
Stained crimson
By the blood
Of thousands slaughtered
The air tainted
By the foul stench
Of death
Fire
Still burning
Fighting
To erase what’s left
And one man
Stands before me
Crimson eyes
Crazed
Staring
I wake screaming
Just a dream

Comments

[shyness-is-sad]

i really like your poem the enviormeant is one thing that really needs attention at the moment i think its to late to change it no matter how much we try alot of people dont care at all so now our beatiful mother earth is dying
along with all the wonderful creations
sorry being weird and off track anywaut it a 5/5

[x-blushinq]

so you like the enoviormeant a tree hugger not bad. its good. i like it. you put in alot of work for this im thinking.

[Black Ski]

one word: wow.