Wingless Angel

• Artist: Nikki4815
• Description: I post a new poem every Monday. Check out my gallery to see my other stuff, and feel free to PM me. I might let you take a look at some not-yet-released stuff.
• Date: 01/05/2009
• Tags: wingless angel

Wingless Angel

She is like an angel,
Just without the wings.
She is so nice,
And we love that songs she sings.
She gives good advice,
And is quite smart.
She may not have wings,
But she certainly has a heart.

She is like an angel,
Just without the wings.
She is so sweet,
And what happiness she brings!
She is just as
Bright as anyone else.
She deserves more than she has.

She is like an angel,
Just without the wings.
She is so lively,
And she always knows the right things,
That should be done.
When we’re around her,
We always have such fun.

But that is the past,
No longer lived.
It was a blast,
But now it’s done.
We will always remember the day,
That her end begun.

Comments

[xSharpiix]

Next time try a more readable color. It's good, I like it.

[Ishkir]

Hey, just checking your stuff like you requested. Pretty good. I like the turn at the end

[persinomm]

This is really incredible. How sweet! ^_^

[Aya-Whitewater]

i love it. look at mine ive posted more

[Blaesse]

It's really good. There are some typos, though, but still very deep, your writing has a great voice. 4/5

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

crying i think its perfect, lovely job crying

[Gracie Jane]

Its good but not my favorite you know what I mean? But I love the blue heart stuff on the paper, its pretty.