I had a dream....

• Artist: Je t_aime Ran
• Description: Ok....for thos people who might not understand this poem...here is a better explaination.
  There was a girl who had a boyfriend and he died and the girl she saw in her dream was herself and she killed her self cause she lost the other side of her heart when her boyfriend died...i hope u like it....it worked hard.
• Date: 01/07/2009
• Tags: dream

I had a dream
That you were standing
Right next to me.

You whispered in my ear
How much you loved me,
How much you cared.

Then I had a nightmare
That you let go of my hands
Walking away, not giving a look to spare.

I ran after you yelling.
Then she came from the mist
Blushing and smiling.

You took her in your arms
And kissed her deeply
Then I heard a alarm.

No not an alarm,
A gust of wind, a scream
Then everything was blank.

Closing my eyes, I opened them again
And saw the girl crying…alone
Her face showing pain.

Where were you, did u leave?
You were gone
Gone from me….

Her hair was short and curly
I saw a girl with a broken heart
I saw me.

As I walked towards her, scared
My fingers stretched out
Then she disappeared

I look on the ground, everything still
Then biting my lip,
I saw a bottle of pills.

Comments

[Xellica22]

5/5 smile

[Xellica22]

A bit confusing but. . . it's really sad and if I imagined it real hard I'd definitely cry coz of sadness sad

[babyblueai]

oh wow i really love this poem very deep u should be a proffesional poem writter 5/5

[Starlight_Miss]

It's so sad. 4/5. Please rate back.

[Moonlight_Maiden123]

i like it, itcertainly sounds like a nightmare O_O i know id be sarced

[iluvpolkadots]

Good job.