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Sleek and mysterious
The limo drives up
The cameras flash
and crowds erupt
The door clicks open and
a foot steps out
Boyfriends are gawking
their girlfriends will pout
A radient star
walking swiftlly around
Smiling and waving
without a sound
They see us stare
we see them go
Through grand doors
that look aglow
She blows us a kiss
he gives to us a bow
We're all blown back
then murmur a "wow!"
- by supergirl10895 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/10/2009 |
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- Title: Stars of the Night
- Artist: supergirl10895
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Description:
A poem I created for a school contest but never got the guts to submit. Does anyone think I made a bad choice or I would probably get rejected on the first level?
The theme was "Wow" - Date: 01/10/2009
- Tags: stars night celebrities
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Faebel217 - 05/10/2009
- It's nice how you painted a scene with this poem. You used very powerful words to describe the how the crowd reacted to the "stars of the night". It was a little distracting how I had to shift my eyes from one side to another while reading. Other then that, great job!
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- Hikaru1214 - 03/16/2009
- great!!!
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