Rain

• Artist: jekoy
• Description: im not good in poetry at all..so..i dunno..just leave comments..
• Date: 01/11/2009
• Tags: rain

You know exactly
when it rains.
You know exactly
when it started.
But you will not know
when exactly
it will stop.

Comments

[dares2dream]

try adding more to ur next one! smile

[Caleco]

it's prety good considering that it's just a free verse poem. keep on working on them, i'm sure you could make them much more structured over time.