Lovers Poem

• Artist: iloveyourmomsllama14
• Description: i say its for the best
  i wouldn't tell you the rest
  i stayed with you for so long
  i took a knife and slit my throat
  i once-and-for-all wrote
  "i loved you everyday
  But i knew you never felt the same"
  ~rosebudd137~
• Date: 01/18/2009
• Tags: lovers poem

just kinda wrote it...

Comments

[Lord Zendejas]

this is awsome!

[CalvinRexx]

The poem was supposed to be in the box where you wrote "just kinda wrote it", but whatever.

You started off rhyming very well and then everything stopped rhyming altogether. You also neglected to capitalize 'I'.