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A life with out happiness
A life that was blue
I don’t know where I would be
If my life didn’t have you
Life with you is great
Life without you would be horrible
Life with love
Makes life incredible
- Title: Life & Love
- Artist: camc14
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- Date: 01/19/2009
- Tags: life love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kagurome - 02/28/2009
- This touched me, I really think it will touch a lot. Be careful who you give our heart to, they just might break it. 10/5 * i wish*
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- Kimono325 - 01/27/2009
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I like the idea of this poem. But I think it could be better. Give it more depth...y'know, put your heart and soul into it. And one more thing:
Adjectives are your friend. All in all, 3/5 - Report As Spam
- Water of Fenri - 01/20/2009
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Be careful how much of your heart you give someone...
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